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What even are time and change and movement, that happen at such different speeds and yet simultaneously?

Lots of paradox layered beautifully in these images, Adam. Thank you.

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Thanks, Elizabeth! 🙏

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My, that is a beautiful one! Lovely imagery here!

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Thank you so much, Bethel! I really appreciate the comment. I’m happy you enjoyed my poem. :)

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A poem that paints a picture that is a make-believe situation. Of course this is not really happening. It is a imaginative happening which serves well the poetic language.

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Thanks for reading and enjoying the poem, Luis!

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Dam - another stunner! Great Saturday afternoon reading.

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Thank you, Dick! I really appreciate the comment.

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