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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

What even are time and change and movement, that happen at such different speeds and yet simultaneously?

Lots of paradox layered beautifully in these images, Adam. Thank you.

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thanks, Elizabeth! 🙏

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Luis A. Estable's avatar

A poem that paints a picture that is a make-believe situation. Of course this is not really happening. It is a imaginative happening which serves well the poetic language.

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thanks for reading and enjoying the poem, Luis!

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Dam - another stunner! Great Saturday afternoon reading.

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thank you, Dick! I really appreciate the comment.

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thank you so much, Bethel! I really appreciate the comment. I’m happy you enjoyed my poem. :)

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