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Cynthia's avatar

‘The mere fire of your existence’ that's awesome.

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Tara Connor's avatar

I like the changes. Really beautiful, just like the first time. But the separation into stanza adds in these nice breaths. I was just practicing piano before I read this so I'm seeing the change in structure like rests, or the sustain pedal. It's a lovely effect.

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