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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

So spare and lovely.

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thank you, Margaret! 😊

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jennae's avatar

gorgeous!

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thank you!

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Luis A. Estable's avatar

The one thing I take away form this good poem is the magical moment, as I see it, that changed the situation. Well done!

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thank you, Luis! :)

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Thomas Rist's avatar

Tremendous ending!

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thanks, Thomas!

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Jon Hunter's avatar

Beautiful

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thank you, Jon! I'm glad you liked my poem.

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Cynthia's avatar

Lovely!

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Adam Lombard's avatar

Thank you, Cynthia! :)

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Tara Connor's avatar

I'm sitting here sweating at 9:00 am and this poem reminded be how lovely it will be when a walk outdoors does not require a shower and a complete change of clothes. I am so looking forward to fall.

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Adam Lombard's avatar

I'm looking forward to it, too!

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