14 Comments

So spare and lovely.

Expand full comment

Thank you, Margaret! 😊

Expand full comment

gorgeous!

Expand full comment

Thank you!

Expand full comment

The one thing I take away form this good poem is the magical moment, as I see it, that changed the situation. Well done!

Expand full comment

Thank you, Luis! :)

Expand full comment

Tremendous ending!

Expand full comment

Thanks, Thomas!

Expand full comment

Beautiful

Expand full comment

Thank you, Jon! I'm glad you liked my poem.

Expand full comment

Lovely!

Expand full comment

Thank you, Cynthia! :)

Expand full comment

I'm sitting here sweating at 9:00 am and this poem reminded be how lovely it will be when a walk outdoors does not require a shower and a complete change of clothes. I am so looking forward to fall.

Expand full comment

I'm looking forward to it, too!

Expand full comment