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So spare and lovely.

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Thank you, Margaret! 😊

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The one thing I take away form this good poem is the magical moment, as I see it, that changed the situation. Well done!

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Thank you, Luis! :)

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Tremendous ending!

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Thanks, Thomas!

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Jul 29Liked by Adam Lombard

Beautiful

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Thank you, Jon! I'm glad you liked my poem.

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Lovely!

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Thank you, Cynthia! :)

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Jul 27Liked by Adam Lombard

I'm sitting here sweating at 9:00 am and this poem reminded be how lovely it will be when a walk outdoors does not require a shower and a complete change of clothes. I am so looking forward to fall.

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I'm looking forward to it, too!

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