Poem No.184
Adam, this is lovely and so touching.
Thank you, Gloria! 🙏
'I liked the game,
the chorus of the crowd,
the hot salted popcorn we would share.'
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Love the roll of these lines Adam
Thank you! Those were the lines I struggled with in this poem, so thank you for calling them out. I'm glad they spoke to you. :)
Lovely. "The chorus of the crowd" is so spot on.
Thank you, Margaret! 🙏
This is such a rich poem. The smell of cigars reminds me of my dad.
Thank you, LeeAnn :)
Yes, the power of scent to pull the past into the present is really something, isn't it?
Thank you, Treasa! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. 🙏
Adam, this is lovely and so touching.
Thank you, Gloria! 🙏
'I liked the game,
the chorus of the crowd,
the hot salted popcorn we would share.'
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Love the roll of these lines Adam
Thank you! Those were the lines I struggled with in this poem, so thank you for calling them out. I'm glad they spoke to you. :)
Lovely. "The chorus of the crowd" is so spot on.
Thank you, Margaret! 🙏
This is such a rich poem. The smell of cigars reminds me of my dad.
Thank you, LeeAnn :)
Yes, the power of scent to pull the past into the present is really something, isn't it?
Thank you, Treasa! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. 🙏